The Contrary Spirit

[nibbed]

Hi Szczepan, I will attempt a critique here.



Crashed his hearse                                          "he lived", that's really good
     on a one-way cul de sac                              good metaphor for going in circles
Survived his widow                                           again, he lives
     and he then drove back                               maybe not "drove" since he crashed his hearse?
His ghostwritten prose,                                     I was thinking a woman writing as a man or vice versa
     all autobiographies …                                  
… tweak’d Pinocchio’s nose                                made someone more truthful?
     with false tautologies                                   
Consistency, veracity                                        
     with him had died                                        he gave up, contrary spirits are often like vapors
He’d only be truthful                                          but sadly sometimes they can linger and cause a lot of trouble
     when he said that he lied                              this could be a changing end, I like hope



Good rhyme and interesting read.
The poem was true as a whole
and fit well with the title, yes, contrary spirit.
The form was good, too.
I apologize for the weird change in fonts,
it's getting late here.
I hope your evening/day is wonderful!