Falling …notes found in an open field whilst walking.edit 1.0001. nibb,rich

Falling …notes found in an open field whilst walking.edit 1.0001. nibb,rich

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05-05-2017, 12:00 PM

Hey tectak,
I think your revisions greatly improved the clarity of this being about a parachute jump. I liked the original draft, but I like this version even more.

Nice work,
Richard

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Falling …notes found in an open field whilst walking.edit 1.0001. nibb,rich - by tectak - 04-26-2017, 11:38 PM

RE: Falling …notes found in an open field whilst walking. - by Richard - 04-29-2017, 12:48 PM

RE: Falling …notes found in an open field whilst walking. - by tectak - 04-29-2017, 05:03 PM

RE: Falling …notes found in an open field whilst walking. - by nibbed - 04-29-2017, 09:36 PM

RE: Falling …notes found in an open field whilst walking. - by tectak - 04-30-2017, 03:50 AM

RE: Falling …notes found in an open field whilst walking. - by Richard - 04-30-2017, 02:06 PM

RE: Falling …notes found in an open field whilst walking. - by tectak - 05-04-2017, 03:35 PM

RE: Falling …notes found in an open field whilst walking.edit 1.0001. nibb,rich - by Richard - 05-05-2017, 12:00 PM

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