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05-05-2017, 06:12 AM
I'm not a very experienced critic, but your poem was actually pretty good. I like a lot of the imagery such as walking around an empty cage. It's got a melancholy tone, which is honestly my favourite when it comes to poetry. Some of your lines do have quite a bit of repetition, though and I feel like it could have been a bit more condensed. But overall, it's a pretty good poem!
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