dusk waits for no one
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night waits for no one--                                 -this is pretty clear
quick! down fallen thorntree leaves,               -is the order to be quick? why down the thorntree leaves?
spring, child! to the jeeps                               -they had a jeep convention here this past week, many jeeps, is that it?




Hi RiverNotch.

I am sorry I don't quite get it.
But maybe we live in different worlds,
and I am ignorant to your wonderful
exotic surroundings?

Best wishes!
I look forward to reading your poetry!

janine
there's always a better reason to love
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dusk waits for no one - by RiverNotch - 10-15-2015, 10:52 PM
RE: dusk waits for no one - by Lizzie - 04-12-2017, 04:58 AM
RE: dusk waits for no one - by RiverNotch - 05-05-2017, 12:00 AM
RE: dusk waits for no one - by nibbed - 05-05-2017, 12:18 AM
RE: dusk waits for no one - by RiverNotch - 05-05-2017, 12:23 AM
RE: dusk waits for no one - by nibbed - 05-05-2017, 01:30 AM



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