05-04-2017, 10:21 PM
I wish I did, but I don't have a clue what's going on here. Could be you, could be me. "trees of logic not quite begotten." stopped me but I figured I might get through it when I could follow and liked L2. Then alchemy, ok, what about it? L4-6:I got nothing. Google St Malthus, ok, population, still lost. L9-12
L13/14 ok, I get that and nicely phrased. After that nothing. Sorry, we have some members that may very well do better with this, welcome to the pen and thanks for the critiques you've already given others, glad to have you here. 
Oh, and I like the title, it helps, just not enough for me.
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