05-04-2017, 06:07 AM
revision 1:
crumpled papers skip astray
and scatter like kites
hahaha I liked the revision better.
But if something is astray,
isn't it, well...kinda scattered?
kite's wrappings escape
(caught up in excitement's whirl)
making flights their own
crumpled papers skip astray
and scatter like kites
hahaha I liked the revision better.
But if something is astray,
isn't it, well...kinda scattered?
kite's wrappings escape
(caught up in excitement's whirl)
making flights their own
there's always a better reason to love