Fiddler Crab (revised)

[nibbed]

Second Revision

Fiddler Crab

Cymbal waves
muffle the giggles
your maneuvers create,

funny, you boast
on sandy stage:

a giant muscley fist,
silly intimidator's claw.

Thankfully, crusty bisque armor
protects your center,
and a moment's treasure
with my heart.

Side steppin's more precious
with you,
tiny tiptoe dancer.






First Revision
(needs polishing)


Fiddler Crab

Cymbal waves muffle
the giggles you create,
as your sandy stage boasts
intimidation's fattest claw;

Bisque armor protects
the treasure of our hearts.

Side steppin's more precious
with you, tiptoe dancer.




Original

Fiddler Crab

Cymbal waves disguise
the giggles you create,
as sandy stages boast
intimidation's fattest claw;
Bisque armor covers
the tenderest heart.
Side steppin's more precious
with you, tiptoe dancer.