Engaged

[inmostcave]

I just want to be able to say
I let this world seize me
And that I reached out and                      for me it's a little too much to use 'and' both in the beginning and ending 
Seized it too.
Not the day,
Not the moment,
I just want to be able to say
That whatever the timeline,
No matter the outcomes:
Me and this world
Had our sweaty hands all over each other.

Halo Elizazile,

I really like this short piece. The message is strong with how you turn around the user of 'seize'. it gives me new perspective (and hope too) and i wasn't really expecting that ending line. so good.   

Keep up with the work. I'm looking forward to it