04-26-2017, 12:51 PM
Hi!
When I read this I immediately thought about teenage love, or at least how a teenager feels - as if the world is against them and they have to push back harder on those who pushed them first. This poem is concise and to the point, which in my opinion is an accomplishment because it is hard to say what you want to in such a little space but you conveyed a heavy feeling in only a few lines which is impressive. Good work!
When I read this I immediately thought about teenage love, or at least how a teenager feels - as if the world is against them and they have to push back harder on those who pushed them first. This poem is concise and to the point, which in my opinion is an accomplishment because it is hard to say what you want to in such a little space but you conveyed a heavy feeling in only a few lines which is impressive. Good work!