Engaged

[Napalm]

Some great lines and tons of potential. Love the concept of this. I just wasn't ready for the last line "sweaty hands" when I came to it.( loved that)But for me, the poem started out serious with a light undertone of a new self acknowledged enlightenment and life renewed. This was good on its own to keep me interested though as well. I think all this needs is more content to pace the shift of feeling leading up to that comedic relief. I enjoyed a good laugh at the last line though.