Higher Still
#10
Running and playing in the second stanza may help convey a more visceral picture. 

O! Our family we do love instead of our family do we love? Not sure about this one though ..


Overall great poem!!
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Higher Still - by JaredEggo - 02-05-2017, 02:51 PM
RE: Higher Still - by ellajam - 02-05-2017, 07:57 PM
RE: Higher Still - by JaredEggo - 02-08-2017, 04:09 AM
RE: Higher Still - by kylede87 - 02-10-2017, 03:46 AM
RE: Higher Still - by Erthona - 02-12-2017, 06:10 AM
RE: Higher Still - by muteyy - 02-26-2017, 02:46 AM
RE: Higher Still - by Flos Campi - 02-26-2017, 12:22 PM
RE: Higher Still - by Richard - 04-01-2017, 05:00 AM
RE: Higher Still - by hesawacko - 04-11-2017, 02:52 AM
RE: Higher Still - by rylstjames - 04-22-2017, 04:42 PM
RE: Higher Still - by headybeach - 04-24-2017, 04:26 AM
RE: Higher Still - by B.nicole - 08-16-2017, 03:35 PM
RE: Higher Still - by Ecesis - 08-17-2017, 01:59 PM



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