NaPM April 21, 2017
#10
(04-21-2017, 09:14 PM)Teagan Wrote:  Hannibal Lector’s Soup Kitchen
and Billiard Parlor

elbowed into
this city of crystal edges
a warm bubble if beneath the bridge
is the other option--
breakfast
an evening meal
no charge but a share of chores
a warm and dry bed for this night
and the next
the blessed man
runs it all
from his own pocket
I hear
and they hate him for it
the quiet show and grim look
but we love him here
so misunderstood
so undervalued
so attentive

rack 'em up!
Brilliant title Teagan and a nice string theory version of Hannibal Lecter. (watch the spelling on the last name--I only know because I wrote a Lecter piece about 4 years ago for NaPM). You set mood so well in the first few lines.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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