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[tectak]

Not sure if you wanted any feedback, but this seems like rudimentary work, lazy even. I won't offend you further by going into detail. At least there was a positive idea in your head, but I think you should scrap this and begin afresh.

It was all of those things plus lingua in maxillam. The idea was not to overburden the forum with layered complexity but to indicate how sterotyping can and should be eliminated. I guess the intent was overpowered by impotency
All crit is eaten. Thank you for yours.
tectak.