No seagull feel

[burrealist]

The sailing of a bare Seagull Sea
on field and path, on road and roof I sense a rhythm. Although, it's the images that I feel are disconnected. Fields, paths, and roads are all grounded, and roofs are erected into the air. I think you are identifying areas seagulls like to loiter in, but I am actually failing to see the connection made here. The rest of the poem is very abstract, so... I am not going to suggest anything outside of what you've already written.
heard radio sound effects man giving birds two deaths Is the Seagull Sea hearing these effects? 
all my eye-catching gone Go-Birds Between "No seagull feel" and this line, I sense a connection made. In general, just a connection of senses. Seagulls not feeling and you not seeing. Previously, though, something is heard on the radio. Maybe I'm overanalyzing it now. Coming next...
sick smell the sick The hearing and the smelling have been favored over seeing and feeling?
investigate the Burke and Hare rooms
guilt formation in the new times 
opened cognac in olden times before all this Heaven You can hear cognac opening and smell it, and once tasted may make you feel sick. Why haven't you explored tasting after exploring the other four senses?

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Beyond my observations, I feel like you have a deeply interwoven poem broken from the confines of reality. I respect the wording and the imagery. Surrealism and Absurdism have always fascinated me.

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Also, any allusions made, I do not understand. Really, I don't know what this is about.