Loser
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(04-09-2017, 12:25 AM)Paul Welsh Wrote:  Title: Loser

Coffin carriers high  -- Pallbearers? 
straight gaits pitch make cuff shoots
cement steps over denomination trade
holy water coolant drops
got ceiling fresco eyes
Altar ego trip -- Pun? 

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Kind of confusing. Idk, some poems are weird, and it's hard to Turing test them. Not an expert in aesthetics, but who the hell is?
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Loser - by Paul Welsh - 04-09-2017, 12:25 AM
RE: Loser - by nibbed - 04-09-2017, 01:02 PM
RE: Loser - by Paul Welsh - 04-09-2017, 06:39 PM
RE: Loser - by Brownlie - 04-09-2017, 06:27 PM
RE: Loser - by Mark Cecil - 04-10-2017, 05:15 AM
RE: Loser - by Paul Welsh - 04-11-2017, 01:01 AM
RE: Loser - by Szczepan - 05-06-2017, 10:53 PM



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