Circumstances

[burrealist]

Thanks burrealist, I chose the form cause I'd never tried one, and made up the story as I went along. I wasn't sure how repetitive it had to be, I thought the punctuation was the only leniency, but I agree it would flow smoother with a few tweaks. I'm always learning new things on this site!

Glad to hear it's fiction, but the way you emote seems real. I thought it was written in passion.