Engaged

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Hi Elizazile,


The title engaged me. It drew me in. The poem is very striking though I may be interpreting it wrong. It seems
the narrator is expressing a continued confidence and success in whatever he or she might do, will do, has done,
or is about to do! No matter what, they will give it their best. It's as though the narrator is a cheerleader to himself
or herself making a declaration for all to hear! We should all encourage ourselves to strive for the best! This poem's
expression is quite catchy, too. Happy poem! Thank you!




 
I just want to be able to say                          comma here
I let this world seize me
And that I reached out and
Seized it too.                                                 comma after it
Not the day,
Not the moment,
I just want to be able to say
That whatever the timeline,
No matter the outcomes:
Me and this world
Had our sweaty hands all over each other.     I want to move "all over each other" to the last line position
                                                                      A very good play on words, too, I might add.


Very perky! You seem to have been inspired!
Best wishes!