04-01-2017, 10:25 AM
Hey Leanne,
Thanks for the feedback. It definitely gave me more to think about. This poem has been sort of struggle for me since I wrote it years ago. It's like I know what I want to say, but it just never seems to come together quite right for this poem regardless how much I edit/revise it. That is the reason I decided to post it. I've already had a couple of ideas sparked by the feedback, and I hope to get a few more before I finalize another version of this poem.
Thanks again,
Richard
Thanks for the feedback. It definitely gave me more to think about. This poem has been sort of struggle for me since I wrote it years ago. It's like I know what I want to say, but it just never seems to come together quite right for this poem regardless how much I edit/revise it. That is the reason I decided to post it. I've already had a couple of ideas sparked by the feedback, and I hope to get a few more before I finalize another version of this poem.
Thanks again,
Richard