Chosen Losses

[burrealist]

Casting off If you give some detail about what is being casted, I think that will help.
The weight that eases my aches Oh, I didn't know the first line was leading into this second one. It took a couple read-overs for me. Maybe you can fuse some of the lines throughout the whole piece, make it more solid.
Setting down
The chair that holds half my weight 
Dislocating
The small skylight to my shadowy home; I thought a part of that weak chair mentioned was going be dislocated. There's nothing wrong with going in unexpected directions.
This is the investment I am told I must make
For less of the same
(Whatever that may mean)
And for brighter somedays.
Now is where Where is now?
Something like faith kicks in
As, through the gaping hole
My living room begins to fill
With rain
And blustering winds
And the hurricanes that chase I was told that rainstorms almost always symbolize a character's change. They also symbolize hardship and crying, for that matter.
The rays of light
That find me alone
In my soft old armchair 
In the corner.

My favorite part was the description of the storm whirling through your home. With more imagery like that, this piece will really thrive. Good work!