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I have a herniation in my c7 and reading this made it worse. The formatting doesn't work on a mobile phone and I have to sweep my eyes across the screen back and forth. Where can I send you the bill for my MRI?
I agree with Lizziep for once that the ending on 'turn' isn't satisfactory, and ending L1 on 'roars' might be better.
I love the details in 'Jackson', 'tiny tables' and 'expensive coffee'.
Not a poem for all time, but a lovely little vignette of life.
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe
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< Denver Airport at 8 am > - by rayheinrich - 03-25-2017, 05:46 PM
RE: < Denver Airport at 8 am > - by Lizzie - 03-26-2017, 05:12 AM
RE: < Denver Airport at 8 am > - by burrealist - 03-28-2017, 03:26 AM
RE: < Denver Airport at 8 am > - by rayheinrich - 03-29-2017, 06:46 PM
RE: < Denver Airport at 8 am > - by amaril - 03-30-2017, 03:22 AM
RE: < Denver Airport at 8 am > - by Achebe - 03-30-2017, 06:40 AM
RE: < Denver Airport at 8 am > - by burrealist - 03-30-2017, 06:52 AM
RE: < Denver Airport at 8 am > - by RiverNotch - 03-30-2017, 09:38 PM



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