03-26-2017, 01:06 AM
I actually love this, duke. It's very witty and well said.
My only call out which isn't really a problem so much as just a statement of my reaction, is that the first one has an irregular syllable count and the last two are 5-7-5, which makes it seem to me like the first one was counted wrong.
Cue ray to tell me how wrong I am about all things haiku.
My only call out which isn't really a problem so much as just a statement of my reaction, is that the first one has an irregular syllable count and the last two are 5-7-5, which makes it seem to me like the first one was counted wrong.
Cue ray to tell me how wrong I am about all things haiku.