< Denver Airport at 8 am >

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                                                                < Denver Airport at 8 am >

                                                                the Rocky Mountains turn
                                                                to roars and runways
                                                                taxis, cars, and buses
                                                                concrete parking echoes
                                                                of departures and arrivals
                                                                luggage
                                                                brown and black
                                                                it's going somewhere
                                                                with a man whose sign is saying "Jackson"
                                                                jeans and suits and open sandals, cowboy boots
                                                                and bathrooms filled with soap and toilet tissue
                                                                as we comb our hair
                                                                good socks
                                                                clean shirt
                                                                fresh underwear
                                                                and cops and terrorists and me
                                                                at tiny tables
                                                                drink expensive coffee
                                                                sitting
                                                                waiting
                                                                here in Denver

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rev 1
 < Denver Airport at 8 am >

 the Rocky Mountains turn
 to roars and runways
 taxis, cars, and buses
 concrete parking echoes
 of departures and arrivals
 luggage
 brown and black
 it's going somewhere
 with a man whose sign is saying "Jackson"
 jeans and suits and open sandals, cowboy boots
 and bathrooms filled with soap and toilet tissue
 as we comb our hair
 good socks
 clean shirt
 fresh underwear
 and cops and terrorists and me
 at tiny tables
 drink expensive coffee
 sitting
 waiting
 here in Denver
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rev 0
 < Denver airport at 8 am >

 the Rocky Mountains turn to
 roars and runways
 taxis, cars, and buses
 concrete parking echoes
 of departures and arrivals
 luggage
 brown and black
 is going somewhere
 with a man whose sign is saying "Jackson"
 jeans and suits and open sandals, cowboy boots
 and bathrooms filled with soap and toilet tissue
 as we comb our hair
 clean socks
 nice shirt
 fresh underwear
 and cops and terrorists and me
 at tiny tables
 drink expensive coffee
 sitting
 waiting
 here in Denver
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