03-24-2017, 06:55 AM
I agree, the first two lines are great, the final line not so much.
Though I do like the robins there, another sign of spring.
Maybe, for the final line, just 'bird song'? Or something like that - a volte effect, but still connected.
Though I do like the robins there, another sign of spring.
Maybe, for the final line, just 'bird song'? Or something like that - a volte effect, but still connected.