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03-24-2017, 06:41 AM

I love the first two lines, it's a fantastic image with only five words.

I don't like the ending that much, I get that the robins are fearless, but what are they supposed to be afraid of? The lake? Winter?

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fearless - by ellajam - 03-11-2017, 09:28 PM

RE: fearless - by Wjames - 03-24-2017, 06:41 AM

RE: fearless - by ellajam - 03-24-2017, 06:50 AM

RE: fearless - by just mercedes - 03-24-2017, 06:55 AM

RE: fearless - by ellajam - 03-24-2017, 09:37 AM

RE: fearless - by burrealist - 03-28-2017, 03:33 AM

RE: fearless - by ellajam - 03-28-2017, 04:28 AM

RE: fearless - by burrealist - 03-28-2017, 04:40 AM

RE: fearless - by ellajam - 03-28-2017, 05:13 AM

RE: fearless - by Todd - 03-29-2017, 03:07 AM

RE: fearless - by ellajam - 03-29-2017, 03:48 AM

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