haiku

[rayheinrich]

Doesn't work for me I'm afraid... I mow the lawn at our place, he's afraid of spiders and all the other hidden garden nasties  Shoulda sharpened your blades, lazy bugger.

But the dynamic does work well, there's a neat little undercurrent.

Fixed:
cutting long grass
with blunt-bladed lawnmower--
spouse mocks through window


(And yes, billy's got a nice one here.)