Letter to a Lover, From a Mama's Boy

[burrealist]

Please forgive a few mistakes I made in my critique:

I said "elude". No. I meant "allude".

I suggested that you change "your relatives", but I was wrong. I did not read the entire piece before giving my critique, so I was mistaken as to which family you were referring to. Later, though, I realized my mistake after I already posted the critique.

So I should spend time revising before posting, however yesterday I was rushed out the door. Sorry about that.