03-20-2017, 04:43 AM
baifan,
Thanks for the critique.
Yes it is not a direct quote, however it is a paraphrase and generally that requires that the section be placed in quotes.
Yes, I think you are correct on the "but" at least in the sense that it needs to be removed. I simply doesn't do anything for the sentence, so I will correct that.
"see" could use a "they" be fore it. I'll change that that.
Sorry it have taken me so long to respond, I have been ill, plus it was not bolded on my user CP page.
Thanks again,
dale
Thanks for the critique.
Yes it is not a direct quote, however it is a paraphrase and generally that requires that the section be placed in quotes.
Yes, I think you are correct on the "but" at least in the sense that it needs to be removed. I simply doesn't do anything for the sentence, so I will correct that.
"see" could use a "they" be fore it. I'll change that that.
Sorry it have taken me so long to respond, I have been ill, plus it was not bolded on my user CP page.
Thanks again,
dale
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The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.