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Maybe Now edit 3
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03-18-2017, 01:11 PM
Fantastic piece. Very thought provoking! Upon reading both before and after the edits you made I agree that the simplified version adds complexity and uniqueness. I also appreciate the "Apple a Day" reference as it makes it easier for the reader to connect with what the narrator expresses. -Andrew
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Maybe Now edit 3 - by CRNDLSM - 03-16-2017, 10:27 AM
RE: Maybe Now - by Todd - 03-17-2017, 12:41 AM
RE: Maybe Now - by nibbed - 03-17-2017, 03:08 AM
RE: Maybe Now - by CRNDLSM - 03-17-2017, 03:12 AM
RE: Maybe Now - by nibbed - 03-17-2017, 07:59 AM
RE: Maybe Now - by Lizzie - 03-17-2017, 04:14 AM
RE: Maybe Now edit - by Todd - 03-18-2017, 05:23 AM
RE: Maybe Now edit - by Andrew Davis - 03-18-2017, 01:11 PM
RE: Maybe Now edit 2 - by CRNDLSM - 03-18-2017, 10:42 PM
RE: Maybe Now edit 2 - by Todd - 03-22-2017, 05:29 AM
RE: Maybe Now edit 2 - by Lizzie - 03-26-2017, 02:28 AM
RE: Maybe Now edit 3 - by CRNDLSM - 04-03-2017, 11:29 PM
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