While it sort of changes the ending, I did an adjustment to address the points Lizzie had made about the ending. Hopefully it's improved.
Thank you all,
Todd
Thank you all,
Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Revision 2: The Three Wives of Chuck Taine - by Todd - 03-01-2017, 07:14 AM
RE: The Three Wives of Chuck Taine - by Donald Q. - 03-01-2017, 08:53 AM
RE: The Three Wives of Chuck Taine - by Todd - 03-01-2017, 03:41 PM
RE: The Three Wives of Chuck Taine - by CRNDLSM - 03-17-2017, 03:34 AM
RE: The Three Wives of Chuck Taine - by Todd - 03-17-2017, 03:40 AM
RE: The Three Wives of Chuck Taine - by Lizzie - 03-17-2017, 04:26 AM
RE: The Three Wives of Chuck Taine - by Todd - 03-17-2017, 04:30 AM
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