03-17-2017, 03:08 AM
Hi, CRNDLSM
I really liked the first three stanzas and I get
where you were going with them wanting
to meet up with the maybes (the title seems
to reflect). I would rework and simplify it a bit.
I definitely can see this worked clearer.
I somehow saw a taste of beauty and then a spilling
of hope and help? Have a blessed day!
I really liked the first three stanzas and I get
where you were going with them wanting
to meet up with the maybes (the title seems
to reflect). I would rework and simplify it a bit.
I definitely can see this worked clearer.
I somehow saw a taste of beauty and then a spilling
of hope and help? Have a blessed day!
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