33 rpm

[Keith]

lake, shinning flat disc -- shining, surely? Aren't disks flat by nature? 'Flat' might be superfluous.
lightning stylus touches record
fishes smell the ozone

Hi Keith! The last two lines are killer. I can smell the ozone.

Thanks Lizzie, I like the end line too and the idea but I didn't do it justice, I have tried to re write this a few times but I've never been able to make it work. Thanks for hooking it out of the pond. Best Keith