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03-09-2017, 06:21 AM

(01-10-2013, 10:04 AM)Keith Wrote: lake, shinning flat disc -- shining, surely? Aren't disks flat by nature? 'Flat' might be superfluous.
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Hi Keith! The last two lines are killer. I can smell the ozone. Thumbsup

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33 rpm - by Keith - 01-10-2013, 10:04 AM

RE: 33 rpm - by billy - 01-10-2013, 06:10 PM

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RE: 33 rpm - by Lizzie - 03-09-2017, 06:21 AM

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