Among the Ladies (Senryu)
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(03-08-2017, 11:32 PM)ellajam Wrote:  Sorry duke, for me this just seems like a sentence split into three lines, weak breaks and no image, and I'm definitely missing something because I'm not even sure what you mean. Maybe someone else will get it, if not maybe take another swing at it.
May have broken the form by
implicitly referring back to the title - a cheat on the syllable count
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Among the Ladies (Senryu) - by dukealien - 03-08-2017, 11:26 PM
RE: Among the Ladies (Senryu) - by ellajam - 03-08-2017, 11:32 PM
RE: Among the Ladies (Senryu) - by dukealien - 03-08-2017, 11:36 PM
RE: Among the Ladies (Senryu) - by ellajam - 03-09-2017, 12:00 AM
RE: Among the Ladies (Senryu) - by Lizzie - 03-09-2017, 12:37 AM
RE: Among the Ladies (Senryu) - by dukealien - 03-09-2017, 11:03 PM
RE: Among the Ladies (Senryu) - by RiverNotch - 03-10-2017, 10:24 AM
RE: Among the Ladies (Senryu) - by nibbed - 03-11-2017, 10:52 AM
RE: Among the Ladies (Senryu) - by just mercedes - 03-11-2017, 12:06 PM
RE: Among the Ladies (Senryu) - by billy - 03-11-2017, 05:05 PM
RE: Among the Ladies (Senryu) - by dukealien - 03-12-2017, 07:03 AM



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