The Humbler (Happy Ballet Times Daze)
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Thanks El, those suggestions will definitely help to clean it up and make it tighter. Gonna finish it and put it in the book...so to speak Smile

xoxoxoxoxo

dale

Thanks Lizzie,

Lots a typos that just got by me. I'll take most of this on.

Thanks again.

dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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RE: The Humbler (Happy Ballet Times Daze) - by Erthona - 03-08-2017, 11:11 AM



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