The Seer of Carthage
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Thanks for the feedback guys its been very helpful. Hopefully I can find some time to dish out an edited version. Todd you referred to the phrase "gods of Baal" to be honest I was struggling here to put the line in iambic pentameter so that is why it is the way it is. I still think its okay even though your right Baal was only a god rather a pantheon, but since he was the most important god in the canaanite pantheon I thought "the gods of Baal" still makes sense just like "the gods of Zeus" makes a degree of sense since he is the high god of that pantheon but I might need to rethink this a bit.
Poetry is the unexpected utterance of the soulĀ 

Mark Nepo
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The Seer of Carthage - by Mark Cecil - 03-02-2017, 04:42 AM
RE: The Seer of Carthage - by Todd - 03-02-2017, 05:05 AM
RE: The Seer of Carthage - by Flos Campi - 03-02-2017, 02:15 PM
RE: The Seer of Carthage - by Mark Cecil - 03-03-2017, 10:45 PM



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