03-01-2017, 10:42 AM
I really like the first two lines but the third was a letdown, I already knew that, told in an interesting way. I want some sort of twist at the end, or at the very least the same interesting language.
(03-01-2017, 10:29 AM)nibbed Wrote: Rain pellets fury,
wind shouts a rattling blast:
There's a storm in town!
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