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Thud.
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02-27-2017, 06:21 AM
I don't know why, but the first thing I thought of here was a horror film. Or of my worst nightmare coming true. Laying in bed, listening to the "footsteps" getting closer.... "thickly spreading." Until the thrill subsides when I get killed, or realize it was just my cat. Haha. I really enjoyed reading this. It read nicely and flowed through. Very good short poem!
~I hope to see my Pilot face to face
When I have crost the bar.~ Alfred, Lord Tennyson
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Thud. - by Flos Campi - 02-27-2017, 03:37 AM
RE: Thud. - by Flos Campi - 02-27-2017, 04:55 AM
RE: Thud. - by muteyy - 02-27-2017, 06:21 AM
RE: Thud. - by Flos Campi - 02-27-2017, 11:56 AM
RE: Thud. - by RiverNotch - 02-28-2017, 11:25 PM
RE: Thud. - by Flos Campi - 03-01-2017, 12:47 AM
RE: Thud. - by worros - 03-07-2017, 02:49 PM
RE: Thud. - by tommyb - 03-13-2017, 06:03 AM
RE: Thud. - by glennerdwilliams - 03-24-2017, 01:55 PM
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