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02-24-2017, 09:46 AM

(03-30-2012, 05:35 PM)billy Wrote: bees harvest pollen
from apple blossoms in bloom--
need more honey pots

I agree with ellajam about 'blossoms' and 'blooms' but the image is lovely, and easily tweaked - maybe 'from wreaths of apple blossom' or something similar

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a haiku - by billy - 03-30-2012, 05:35 PM

RE: a haiku - by Lizzie - 02-23-2017, 12:32 PM

RE: a haiku - by ellajam - 02-23-2017, 06:59 PM

RE: a haiku - by just mercedes - 02-24-2017, 09:46 AM

RE: a haiku - by nibbed - 02-26-2017, 04:03 AM

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