Hang On
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(02-15-2017, 09:38 AM)ponykeeper Wrote:  Hang On
 
In the yard a rope hangs
from a large tree. You                     Maybe a different personal
used to swing. A giddy feeling          pronoun, and/or name 
rode your shoulder whispering          specific?
 “higher, higher”.
 
Now you shuffle
with a gait where the weight         
of a troll *being *dragged                   *omit?
*across *the *floor kicks                     
at your calves and pummels             
every inch of your limbs.
It gnaws at your knees                   
and screeches all night.                     
 
So you lie awake.                            
                                                       Surprising twist, it reminded
A giddy dream swings                        me of the troll of arthritis!
from one use of that rope,                  Thank you for the privilege
to another.                                        of critiquing your work.                                                                                                                              
there's always a better reason to love
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Messages In This Thread
Hang On - by ponykeeper - 02-15-2017, 09:38 AM
RE: Hang On - by just mercedes - 02-15-2017, 10:19 AM
RE: Hang On - by ponykeeper - 02-18-2017, 03:02 AM
RE: Hang On - by Caleb Murdock - 02-18-2017, 01:11 PM
RE: Hang On - by ponykeeper - 02-27-2017, 11:17 AM
RE: Hang On - by canofworms - 02-18-2017, 01:22 PM
RE: Hang On - by nibbed - 02-18-2017, 02:53 PM
RE: Hang On - by Flos Campi - 02-27-2017, 12:42 PM
RE: Hang On - by ponykeeper - 02-28-2017, 10:03 AM
RE: Hang On - by Donald Q. - 03-01-2017, 08:29 AM



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