Fly

[billy]

too quick to judge me caleb. i said you need to work the shite out of the piece and that much could be trimmed off, this eludes to the the poem having some merit. that you talked of publishing was enough for others to respond to the fact. at present, the good of the poem; shall we call it the "heart of the poem" is buried under to many pieces of filler. i'm sad you didn't post it for me, and here i am thinking you wanted to read honest feedback but okay.

it's the best poem i've ever read,

Billy, if you don't like the poem at all, and think it needs to be cut dramatically, then you just don't like it, and I didn't write it for you.  I don't like about 80% of the poetry I read, but that doesn't mean it doesn't have some merit.

Talk of publishing was just speculative.