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02-18-2017, 01:56 PM

(02-16-2017, 10:44 PM)Caleb Murdock Wrote: Such a little fly, but well worth the obsession.
in my garbage bin, rising like a phoenix from the rotting meat.

these are good lines, while the cringeworthy ending kills it for any reader with half a brain

~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe

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Fly - by Caleb Murdock - 02-16-2017, 10:44 PM

RE: Fly - by Lizzie - 02-17-2017, 09:54 AM

RE: Fly - by Caleb Murdock - 02-17-2017, 10:17 AM

RE: Fly - by Lizzie - 02-17-2017, 10:42 AM

RE: Fly - by Caleb Murdock - 02-17-2017, 12:44 PM

RE: Fly - by Lizzie - 02-17-2017, 12:53 PM

RE: Fly - by Caleb Murdock - 02-17-2017, 03:44 PM

RE: Fly - by amaril - 02-18-2017, 04:47 AM

RE: Fly - by Caleb Murdock - 02-18-2017, 06:57 AM

RE: Fly - by amaril - 02-18-2017, 08:17 AM

RE: Fly - by Caleb Murdock - 02-18-2017, 10:39 AM

RE: Fly - by Donald Q. - 02-18-2017, 08:59 AM

RE: Fly - by CRNDLSM - 02-18-2017, 09:43 AM

RE: Fly - by billy - 02-18-2017, 01:03 PM

RE: Fly - by Caleb Murdock - 02-18-2017, 01:47 PM

RE: Fly - by billy - 02-18-2017, 02:13 PM

RE: Fly - by Achebe - 02-18-2017, 01:56 PM

RE: Fly - by Caleb Murdock - 02-18-2017, 02:08 PM

RE: Fly - by Caleb Murdock - 02-18-2017, 05:53 PM

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