Fly
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(02-16-2017, 10:44 PM)Caleb Murdock Wrote:  Such a little fly, but well worth the obsession.
in my garbage bin, rising like a phoenix from the rotting meat.
these are good lines, while the cringeworthy ending kills it for any reader with half a brain
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe


Messages In This Thread
Fly - by Caleb Murdock - 02-16-2017, 10:44 PM
RE: Fly - by Lizzie - 02-17-2017, 09:54 AM
RE: Fly - by Caleb Murdock - 02-17-2017, 10:17 AM
RE: Fly - by Lizzie - 02-17-2017, 10:42 AM
RE: Fly - by Caleb Murdock - 02-17-2017, 12:44 PM
RE: Fly - by Lizzie - 02-17-2017, 12:53 PM
RE: Fly - by Caleb Murdock - 02-17-2017, 03:44 PM
RE: Fly - by amaril - 02-18-2017, 04:47 AM
RE: Fly - by Caleb Murdock - 02-18-2017, 06:57 AM
RE: Fly - by amaril - 02-18-2017, 08:17 AM
RE: Fly - by Caleb Murdock - 02-18-2017, 10:39 AM
RE: Fly - by Donald Q. - 02-18-2017, 08:59 AM
RE: Fly - by CRNDLSM - 02-18-2017, 09:43 AM
RE: Fly - by billy - 02-18-2017, 01:03 PM
RE: Fly - by Caleb Murdock - 02-18-2017, 01:47 PM
RE: Fly - by billy - 02-18-2017, 02:13 PM
RE: Fly - by Achebe - 02-18-2017, 01:56 PM
RE: Fly - by Caleb Murdock - 02-18-2017, 02:08 PM
RE: Fly - by Caleb Murdock - 02-18-2017, 05:53 PM



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