Fly

[Caleb Murdock]

Thank you, Lizzie. I thought that moving from the third person to the second person in the first stanza created an interesting effect, but perhaps I'm wrong.

So you really do like that ending better? When I first wrote the original ending, I just loved it -- but no one else has.

As for the role of the narrator, I agree with you when the poem is in the third person, but when it's in the first person/second person, I feel the narrator is speaking personally.

Thanks again!