02-14-2017, 07:47 PM
Yeah, basically this was a silly poem I wrote and wasn't gonna revisit, but then I thought why not pop it into mild, see if it's worth another crack.
Thanks for the feedback. If I do come back to this it probably won't be for a while; it's not the best thing I've ever written as is.
Thanks for the feedback. If I do come back to this it probably won't be for a while; it's not the best thing I've ever written as is.

