02-13-2017, 02:15 AM
Interesting view, ellajam. Anyway, I've thrown some edits down, deleted a bit, and hopefully altered the tone significantly. I can't quite find the words I need to mark the river's division, however. I didn't quite intend to make a riddle out of this, but whatever. I figured even the first draft would have made it clear enough, but I suppose not. I don't think this edit is adding anymore "clues", but it certainly is a clearer expression to me. There's really only two big layers to this, and maybe a tiny third layer.
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"Or, if a poet writes a poem, then immediately commits suicide (as any decent poet should)..." -- Erthona
"Or, if a poet writes a poem, then immediately commits suicide (as any decent poet should)..." -- Erthona