My past year. Also my first submission on the site :)

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My past year. Also my first submission on the site :)

Scribner1
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01-29-2017, 11:26 AM

How I seen it, the point of the repetition, is to bring one back to the remembrance of the main focus.

also, you should look at cutting each line to half its length.
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The overall poem or maybe combine lines?

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My past year. Also my first submission on the site :) - by Scribner1 - 01-29-2017, 10:37 AM

RE: My past year. Also my first submission on the site :) - by Achebe - 01-29-2017, 11:08 AM

RE: My past year. Also my first submission on the site :) - by Scribner1 - 01-29-2017, 11:26 AM

RE: My past year. Also my first submission on the site :) - by billy - 01-29-2017, 12:09 PM

RE: My past year. Also my first submission on the site :) - by bestoweroflight - 01-31-2017, 07:34 AM

RE: My past year. Also my first submission on the site :) - by Wonderfullife - 02-03-2017, 04:23 AM

RE: My past year. Also my first submission on the site :) - by nibbed - 02-24-2017, 06:01 AM

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