Cities
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I'm lost in this poem. 

Gum and freckles

Not the best metaphor to describe Earths pollution. 
I'm assuming the lights are those of cars and makes me wonder why the smog want considered as a form of pollution as well? 

And city lights illuminating earth, done see a blemish, I see as a wonder. Amazing that humans have created such an outspoken network of illumination. Mind you, no lights and the dark earth......is no different than any other planet.
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Cities - by j56 - 01-23-2017, 12:45 AM
RE: Cities - by Weeded - 01-23-2017, 01:40 AM
RE: Cities - by RiverNotch - 01-23-2017, 02:30 PM
RE: Cities - by Achebe - 01-24-2017, 10:22 AM
RE: Cities - by Scribner1 - 01-29-2017, 04:58 AM
RE: Cities - by fanakz - 02-05-2017, 09:21 AM



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