01-28-2017, 07:21 AM
RiverNotch,
Yeah at times I tend to run roughshod over punctuation, generally has to do with the level of dyslexia. You can tell I didn't put sufficient work into this as I did not even go to the trouble to get proper em dashes. Funny you said what you did about the lines
"little buggies farm inside me,
plant their seedlings, plow the field."
This was actually close to what I told my daughter to get her to take her medicine when she was a little girl, so good instincts there.
Thanks, also to el and JM,
dale
Yeah at times I tend to run roughshod over punctuation, generally has to do with the level of dyslexia. You can tell I didn't put sufficient work into this as I did not even go to the trouble to get proper em dashes. Funny you said what you did about the lines
"little buggies farm inside me,
plant their seedlings, plow the field."
This was actually close to what I told my daughter to get her to take her medicine when she was a little girl, so good instincts there.
Thanks, also to el and JM,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.