Silica Gel
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(01-24-2017, 07:33 AM)MadelineAnne Wrote:  
(01-24-2017, 07:27 AM)Achebe Wrote:  
(01-20-2017, 02:22 AM)MadelineAnne Wrote:  The package proclaims
“Winter Harvest,” evoking notions
of pristine snow, white
as the poisonous silica gel
like blanched roe
hidden underneath seaweed sheets
that are fragile as stained glass.

A red exclamation mark
and a dying child with mouth agape
warns in Korean, Japanese,
English, Chinese: Poison! Danger!
So, don't call it health food
when you bring death
so close to my lips.
So since you've figured out that silica gel isn't poisonous after you wrote the poem, I don't need to clarify that! 
So L4 and all of S2 don't make a lot of sense now
Well, aren't you the bearer of bad tidings. Wink Yes, not sure where I'm going now. I thank you guys (I'm assuming you're guys) for your input. I suppose a feel a little relieved that I'm not on the verge of death for my seaweed consumption. Big Grin
Seaweed is great but watch out for the salt overdose
But yeah, it's healthier than fried chips
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe
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Messages In This Thread
Silica Gel - by MadelineAnne - 01-20-2017, 02:22 AM
RE: Silica Gel - by CRNDLSM - 01-20-2017, 06:03 AM
RE: Silica Gel - by RiverNotch - 01-20-2017, 01:22 PM
RE: Silica Gel - by j56 - 01-20-2017, 08:40 PM
RE: Silica Gel - by MadelineAnne - 01-21-2017, 03:11 PM
RE: Silica Gel - by RiverNotch - 01-23-2017, 02:20 PM
RE: Silica Gel - by MadelineAnne - 01-24-2017, 07:09 AM
RE: Silica Gel - by Achebe - 01-24-2017, 07:27 AM
RE: Silica Gel - by MadelineAnne - 01-24-2017, 07:33 AM
RE: Silica Gel - by Achebe - 01-24-2017, 07:34 AM
RE: Silica Gel - by MadelineAnne - 01-24-2017, 07:36 AM



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