01-22-2017, 01:59 PM
(12-14-2016, 01:34 PM)Merrikay Wrote: sip of symphonyI very much enjoyed the flow of this poem. It inspired me to make a separate translation at what you were trying to say. Not sure if I really understood it the way it was meant to be, but this is how I interpreted it.
thirst undone
searing taste to
tepid trained tongue
palette muted
everything grey
transparent relief
opaque daze
Closer to God
Temptation unbound
Spicy hot
To the inexperienced
Flavor overwhelmed
All is bland
Alleviating clarity
Blurred Trance
Keep it up

