Just a taste
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(12-14-2016, 01:34 PM)Merrikay Wrote:  sip of symphony
thirst undone  
searing taste to
tepid trained tongue
palette muted
everything grey
transparent relief
opaque daze
I very much enjoyed the flow of this poem. It inspired me to make a separate translation at what you were trying to say. Not sure if I really understood it the way it was meant to be, but this is how I interpreted it. 
Closer to God
Temptation unbound
Spicy hot 
To the inexperienced
Flavor overwhelmed
All is bland
Alleviating clarity
Blurred Trance

Keep it up Smile
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Messages In This Thread
Just a taste - by Merrikay - 12-14-2016, 01:34 PM
RE: Just a taste - by rowens - 12-14-2016, 02:12 PM
RE: Just a taste - by Merrikay - 12-14-2016, 02:37 PM
RE: Just a taste - by rowens - 12-14-2016, 03:12 PM
RE: Just a taste - by Merrikay - 12-14-2016, 03:24 PM
RE: Just a taste - by rowens - 12-14-2016, 03:32 PM
RE: Just a taste - by MadelineAnne - 01-10-2017, 03:20 AM
RE: Just a taste - by Merrikay - 12-14-2016, 03:45 PM
RE: Just a taste - by Coquette16 - 01-03-2017, 07:10 AM
RE: Just a taste - by HopeVictoria56 - 01-10-2017, 11:46 AM
RE: Just a taste - by j56 - 01-20-2017, 08:48 PM
RE: Just a taste - by Myotis - 01-22-2017, 01:59 PM
RE: Just a taste - by Merrikay - 02-26-2017, 09:24 AM



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