Signs (revised)

[MadelineAnne]

Blanketed in the yellow glow of a low sun
they resemble the illuminated signs
hanging over their heads - 
GATES 3-4 and i for INFORMATION.
These signifiers, translated, uncover meaning.
But what would they look like to the unlearned eye?
Like their faces.

Hi j56! I think you should give more clarity to how exactly 'they' resemble the signs -- I'm assuming they're glowing yellow like the sighs? But, the mind conjures so many hilarious comparisons, none of which could exist in reality, and I get stuck there trying to figure out how people are like signs.

And I agree that the ending fragment sounds like something you'd see on an advertisement, commanding you to 'Like' their page on Facebook.